Monday, February 1, 2010

Robert, a desert squatter in his mid-twenties, approached the small group of truckers gathered around three grills. Meat sizzled over the flames.

"This is a private party," said a retired state-trooper-turned-trucker, clean-shaven excluding an immaculate white mustache.

Robert made his way back to the Circle K. He remained slumped against the brick wall until the sun set, then wandered off into the desert.

6 comments:

  1. awww, I really feel for robert. Were you part of this private party?

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  2. we move between circles out here so yes, we were, but if i had to choose i'd side with the squatters in a heart beat, drug problems n' all

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  3. What makes the squatters more empathetic than the truckers?

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  4. Nothing in particular. In this instance, Robert was high on meth, and I can understand the truckers turning him away. For instance, if someone came over to a party at your house, would you turn them away if they were high on crystal meth?
    Peace and Love,
    Dan

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  5. certain omitted details can completely change a story. Writing is dangerously manipulative...

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  6. all narrative is manipulation, tai, and i think your analogy is not applicable, dan, for a couple of reasons. first of all, it wasn't someone's house. it was a pretty open-ended cookout at a truck stop. excluding teamsters, most of the people there were strangers to one another. secondly, the guy who told robert to scram wasn't even responsible for organizing the cook-out. if donna, the woman who organized the cook-out, told robert to get lost, i would never have written this entry, and knowing donna, i bet she would have been a lot more polite about it. finally, being high doesn't mean you deserve to be treated like dirt. robert was pretty lucid and completely harmless. he was just hungry and they wound up chucking a bunch of food at the end of the cookout anyway. what bugged me about the whole situation is what bugs me about our society's attitude towards the homeless in general: we treat them like they are less than human.

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